My Haiku – The Falls

Relentless the roar

As hungry lions by the score

Niagara roars on

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4 comments

  1. Liz Bennefeld · February 16, 2015

    That’s fun! And a picture, too. i hadn’t thought of that. 🙂 I like the comparison of the waterfall to the roar.

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  2. Charlie Alford · February 16, 2015

    I love the choice and repetition of the word ‘roar’. Very powerful.

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  3. gridthusto · February 16, 2015

    Nice use of simile, I enjoyed this.

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  4. Ameena k.g · February 16, 2015

    Your simile is spot on! One of the most powerful I’ve read so far 🙂

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