Had the most amazing evening. Asked a simple question in a FB group (writers) and have had masses of useful advice and a long conversation with Tarek in Egypt. My Highwayman story will now have a big rethink and some re-writing, thankfully I have just over 3000 words so far, so not a massive amount to do.
It just shows how much knowledge there is out there if you know where to find it. I feel really humbled and so thankful. Glad that I asked the question.
Love you all.